作文题25.0分
英语

第二节 书面表达(满分25分)

假设你是一所国际学校广播站的英语播音员。为提高大家的防震意识,你校将举办一次寺震演习。请你根据所提供信息,用英语写一篇广播稿。

时间:下周二上午0:00---11:00   参加人员:全体学生

要求:(1)班主任先召开班会,对学生进行指导;

(2)各班学生记住自己的疏散路线,听到信号立即开始疏散;

(3)最后班主任带领学生到操场集合。

注意:(1)词数130左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);

(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

(2)参考词汇:演习drill;信号:signal;

Dear boys and girls,

Attention, please!

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

One possible version:

Dear boys and girls,

Attention, please!

An earthquake drill is to be held from 10:00 am to 11:00 am next Tuesday. All the students are required to take part in the drill.

First of all,class meetings should be held first to give the students some instructions on what to do when an earthquake occurs. Additionally, it is important for students in each class to bear in mind your escape routes. On hearing the signal, students should escape immediately under the guidance of the class teacher.

Last but not the least, all the students are to gather in the playground. Two student volunteers should be chosen from each class to keep order during the drill.

That’s all. Thank you.

解析

本题是考查如何写通知,属于应用文体裁,根据材料中提供的要点信息,可以写成三段论样式的文章。学生可联系生活适当发挥,表述连贯即可。

考查方向

本题考查了有关如何写广播稿的知识点。

解题思路

这是一篇广播稿格式的文章。主要人称为第三人称,基本时态以一般现在时为主。

首先第一段是简单说明地震演习的时间和演习对象。第二段是写班主任先要召开班会,对学生进行指导,并且各班学生记住自己的疏散路线,听到信号立即开始疏散。最后是说明演习地点。同学们基本上只要列举出几个方面即可。一方面,要注意文章的结构,如 First of all...Additionally,.........Last but not the least,.....等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。

参考词汇和短语:第一段开头先写 An earthquake drill is to be held from 10:00 am to 11:00 am next Tuesday. ....第二段  First of all,class meetings should be held .......第三段开头: Last but not the least, all the students 等可以让文章成为一个整体,更为流畅。

易错点

格式错误,这是一篇应用文,文章的结构已基本给出。