作文题10.0分
英语

短文改错

Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go. Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirits. On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house. We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached top of the mountain. That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenery there. After having a short rest and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down. It rained even harder. We are wet, and we still sang and laughed  happily.

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解析

该题考查学生准确使用英语的综合能力。做题时候,学生首先需要理顺文章脉络,弄懂文章大意。本文是一篇日记,讲述了作者雨中爬山的事。1)考查动词的固定搭配prevent sb doing sth ,所以用going形式,2)考查副词extremely(极其)修饰形容词narrow, 3)考查不定代词的用法,路只有两边,故用each或either。4)考查名词复数,前有some修饰,house又是可数名词,故用houses, .5)考查冠词,有介词短语作后置定语的名词前须有冠词。. 6)考查主语从句的引导词同时在主句中和主语从句中充当句子成份,用what相当于 something that. 7)考查宾语从句引导词在宾语从句中作do的宾语,用what. 8)考查及物动词share的搭配,share sth with sb, 由于没有指人的名词或代词,故去掉with. 9)考查动词时态,本文说的是last weekend的事,故are改为were. 10)考查连词,我们全身湿透与后面开心地笑是好和坏两方面的事,故用but替换and.

解题思路

1、理顺文章脉络。2.对照着考察方向逐句找错误。3.重读文章核查答案。

易错点

代词、介词、形容词和副词的基本用法、非谓语动词、连词、动词时态语态、动词变形、固定搭配等。