作文题30.0分
英语

67.第二节:书面表达(满分30分)

“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。

要求如下:

①  简述你对这句名言的理解;

②  用一个具体事例加以说明;

③  给出恰当的结尾。

注意:①文章的标题已给出(不计词数):

②文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息,否则按作弊行为认定。

Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better

正确答案及相关解析

正确答案

Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better

Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I Spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful prounnciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

解析

本题考查实际运用语言能力,属于开放类作文, 根据材料中的要求,可以写成三段式的文章。

考查方向

本题考查了学生实际运用语言的能力。

解题思路

写作提示:本文为开放类作文, 对名言的理解用一般现在时态; 具体事例说明时, 用一般过去时态。 建议文章分成三段: 第一段, 对名言的理解; 第二段, 给出具体的事例; 第三段, 结束语。

易错点

无具体事例, 个别句子表述不清。